Monday, March 20, 2017

My special place

My Special Place
-My backyard


1.What i hear       2.What i felt      3.What i smelt     4.What i see


My special place is a place that is green with flowers everywhere I look.As i layed in the grass it was like it sucked me in.As it sucked me in it looked like the grass grew taller and taller it stopped when it was taller then my face.In my special place there is a fence around the Area so that cats don't just walk on in.My special place is a big area so we can run around on.Also it has a 10 meter long swimming pool with a protected fence surrounding the pool.


I heard the trees swishing and going from side to side while dark green leaves rained down on me.I heard the sound of crickets calling out to each other with fright.I heard the splashing of the water exploding out of the pool when each person lined up to jump in.The sound of the dogs barking with the sirens going down the streets.


I felt the dew running down my back it felt like a slimy eel slithering across my back.I laid in the silky grass.The grass dangled around my legs and tickling my ears.The leaves falling onto my face as I took a nap under the trees.I felt my goggles digging into my eyes as I swam through the water like a shark gliding to the surfus.


I smelt the smell of someone cooking cookies I also smelt the smell of poo,dog poo
“Yuck”.I smelt the fresh air as I bounced on a trampoline up high in the air.


I saw the birds flying across the sky like jet planes.I saw helicopters flying through the sky slowly like snails


Written by Caitlyn

2 comments:

  1. Wonderful Story Caitlyn!
    I can clearly paint a picture of what your special place looks like I love all your WOW Words!

    Maybe you should work on your punctuation e.g When you add a full stop. You add a space before u keep on writing :)

    Nice writing again Caitlyn
    -Dannii

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  2. I liked how you described what you saw and smelt and what you heard and felt. all so I like how you said It felt like a slimy eel slithering down my back good job Caitlyn from RUBY

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